okie...my compo ritin..
of cos wif the correctio de la..
red words = the mistake
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Last year, during the novmember school holidays, my mum told me that we were going to HongKong to paymy ,long time no see, granny a visit.My first thought was tat i really hated it beacusei would rather go to some kind of amusement park like disneyland and enjoy myself but i couldn't as i was forced to accompany my parents to pay my granny a visit.
During the flight ti HongKong, i pulled a long face throughout and didn't really talk to my parents at all. When we aloghted at the HongKong"s airport, my aunt was there to fetch us to granny's house.
When we reached granny's house, i didn't even greet anyone because i really hated goin to granny house. I went to sit in a corner of the house and granny came to join me. I didn't realli bother to talk to granny but granny tried to make me enjoy myself by tellin me a funny poem. The poem went like this,"go to hongkong, buy me a pingpong, don't marry a kingkong or you be a tingtong." That little poem eventually made me laugh out loud non-stop for about 3-minutes.
After the laughter granny gave me, i didn't really hate granny that much already. During the afternoon, granny taught me how to make some chinese food called "dim sum". I enjoyed making it as it was quite fun. After we made and cooked the dim sum, of course, we ate it. The dim sum tasted really delicious.
Granny then told me that she wanted to bring us to somewhere after our lunch. I granny where she eventually wanted to bring us to but she refused to say.
After a long car ride, which made me fall asleep, i relised that i had reached "Disneyland"! I jumped up and down in joy as i had wished to go there for a long time. We bought the entrance tickets and went in to have fun.
I took lots of pictures with many different types of cartoon charaters and of course with my family. I really, really had a wonderful moments in there. By then, i realised that i had such a cool and lovely granny.
Afterall, the trip to granny's house for a holiday was not a bad idea at all.
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finalli finish tpyin..can finalli type singlish again..hahaz.. =p
SHIHUI
